You might want to crispen up those shorts though, a really hard angular front crease is more fitting for the gang types, plus it'd give you some nice contrast with the curves.
Edit - like this, but a few sizes larger and a much harsher front crease:
Hahaha! That is quite the reimagining. Nice work.
One thing that bugs me a bit and may be good feedback for you is that his cloths are so clean and well kept. He's got a bat and a baseball but it doesn't seem like he used it much, you know what I mean? Your concept has nice details like tattered shirt and stains. I liked those things It makes him look tough.
I agree with Mishin. I'd also like to see some tattoo's, like the Mother Earth logo somewhere or something. I can see something of the sort on your concept.
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You might want to crispen up those shorts though, a really hard angular front crease is more fitting for the gang types, plus it'd give you some nice contrast with the curves.
Edit - like this, but a few sizes larger and a much harsher front crease:
http://www.ansom-moore.co.uk/henbury-h605-mens-chino-shorts-p-434.html
http://s795.photobucket.com/albums/yy236/lochness_7/ness%20brawl/?action=view¤t=ness-2.mp4
One thing that bugs me a bit and may be good feedback for you is that his cloths are so clean and well kept. He's got a bat and a baseball but it doesn't seem like he used it much, you know what I mean? Your concept has nice details like tattered shirt and stains. I liked those things