This is my first time posting on Polycount...so be gentle

Being that Mortal Kombat is my first love, I couldn't help but pick SubZero; but now that I look at the fourms, I see so many other submissions that I'm a little intimidated...ah but what the hell.

Here's my process work from Alchemy to Photoshop:

Then, I sketched over my silhouette:

My idea is to draw away from the hardcore-Ninja look that he's known for and try something a little different, and come up with a small "backstory:"
-Younger
-Look of a "Rocker"
-Has some form of demonic powers; encases parts of his body in ice
-Cool breath from his mouth makes a shrowd around his neck that flows from his shoulders
-Ice-tail from his head makes for a fun-stabby-weapon
-The more he uses his powers, the more it takes a toll on his body, until there's nothing left
The things I will stay true to with his design are the main themes of frost/mist, ice, and the colors & patters of his outfit from "Deception," minus the pimp-fur. I welcome all critique & suggestions, because this is deffinetly a learning process for me.
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I may push the proportions even more, like Cheeks-74 on deviantArt. Updates soon!
Thankyou, by the way