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Need Critiques Before Unwarp
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polycounter lvl 9
Mar 2011
definitely want to get the proportions right on this one before i go any further, please help
the tears on the tail and flag will be alpha mapped
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Carl Brannstrom
Mar 2011
Just set the concept as viewport background and compare.
Look for landmarks on the concept and compare with your model and you will see what's off and what's not.
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Thriller Theater
Mar 2011
The proportions are a little bit off from the concept, do as said before if you want them to be more exact. Though I don't dislike the shorter design either.
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Alberto Rdrgz
polycounter lvl 15
Mar 2011
the body of your model needs to be slimmer and the back engine looks different.
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harrytraynor
Mar 2011
in general its looking great, but follow the crit mentioned and it should look better.
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popngear
Mar 2011
There should be 2 spherical engines placed in the rear.
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Look for landmarks on the concept and compare with your model and you will see what's off and what's not.