Hmm, I'm going to be blunt with you: I could use some more work.
Right now, the cynical side of me says, "You just slapped a scarf and goggles on the original character" but I know you're trying to give a new personality to Talon.
While the theme is cool, I don't think you're pushing it far enough. Dig deeper into the tatsunoko universe and really diversify this guy. Remember, this isn't just a redesign competition, it's a re-imagining competition. Really push this guy.
This has a lot of potential and I just think you could do better. That's just my opinion anyway and if you choose to go with this then go for it.
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Comments/critiques of course welcome. :V
Right now, the cynical side of me says, "You just slapped a scarf and goggles on the original character" but I know you're trying to give a new personality to Talon.
While the theme is cool, I don't think you're pushing it far enough. Dig deeper into the tatsunoko universe and really diversify this guy. Remember, this isn't just a redesign competition, it's a re-imagining competition. Really push this guy.
This has a lot of potential and I just think you could do better. That's just my opinion anyway and if you choose to go with this then go for it.