[Portfolio] Valdemar Nyhl

sltrOlsson

ALL CONTENT IS STILL JUST PLACE HOLDERS

I'm trying to get my shit together and spit out a decent portfolio.

I would like some crits on the site as it is. Any id

noname

I like your general site layout. The background is a bit too dark in my opinion, especially when you use that same dark color as the background in the image of your dark gun. Makes it hard to read.

The about and contact links are very hard to see at all for me.

I don't get the point of the big hiding arrow.. is that a tumblr thing? It would be a great "back to top of the page" button instead though. At least that's what I expected to happen when I clicked it.

I'd go with vnyhlen.se. ..or maybe just nyhlen.se, if that's free as well?

Visceral

Just a quick question, you didnt happen to attend Futuregames Academy in Stockholm right?

glenatron

Yeh, a 'back to top' button would be groovy.
I'd also ditch the 'aspiring' from your title, and make your name/role much larger/clearer. Other than that, it's nice, clean and simple.

chrisradsby

What? A million tris for the Tavern, that is some impressive work xD

EDIT: Maybe I should say a thing or two about the site as well. I think you need to change the color of About me and Contact, really hard to spot them. Maybe detail your email, cellphone number, CV or linkedIn account as well.

sltrOlsson

noname wrote: »

I like your general site layout. The background is a bit too dark in my opinion, especially when you use that same dark color as the background in the image of your dark gun. Makes it hard to read.

The about and contact links are very hard to see at all for me.

I don't get the point of the big hiding arrow.. is that a tumblr thing? It would be a great "back to top of the page" button instead though. At least that's what I expected to happen when I clicked it.

I'd go with vnyhlen.se. ..or maybe just nyhlen.se, if that's free as well?

Yeah, I went with a 15% gray at first, but i wanted to se how it felt with the image "mellting" together with the background. I need to figure out a PS template for the pics..

I managed to find were the about me/contact sizes could be changed. Some HTML sense is still there :P Same goes with the uggly triangle. The theme is called pink triangle, don't ask me why it's there though.

Both nyhlen.se and .com is taken. .eu dosn't feel that hot :P

Visceral wrote: »

Just a quick question, you didnt happen to attend Futuregames Academy in Stockholm right?

I'm a member of the dreaded Playground Squad

glenatron wrote: »

Yeh, a 'back to top' button would be groovy.
I'd also ditch the 'aspiring' from your title, and make your name/role much larger/clearer. Other than that, it's nice, clean and simple.

Thx, you'r right

chrisradsby wrote: »

What? A million tris for the Tavern, that is some impressive work xD

EDIT: Maybe I should say a thing or two about the site as well. I think you need to change the color of About me and Contact, really hard to spot them. Maybe detail your email, cellphone number, CV or linkedIn account as well.

Haha, you think? My mom said that a million was OK?

I'll try my best to bombard the page with my email some more. All the pics will have my email to. Thx for reminding me about linking in linkedIn (aaaaah ) and FB

HTML is like a really fucked bike, you will always have the knowledge somewhere in you head :P

It's updated btw..

Mouldtooth

I agree with Noname. You should change the backgound on the gun render. It's very hard to see the model. It's a nice gun BTW!

sltrOlsson

Thx Bjoarn (yes it's needed) all the images will have an extensive overhaul once this goes live fo realz.

You need to post more of your stuff here, you know that right?!

sltrOlsson

Okey, I've rendered out most of my highpolys now. What do you think? Is all the pictures like this to much? Should i divide it into own pages instead?

sltrOlsson

I've started looking into Cargocollective. What do you guys say? The tumblr one or the new, Cargocollective one?

http://cargocollective.com/vnyhlen
OR
www.vnyhlen.se