Low Poly Army man

CactusFantastico

Hello! so im making a low poly army man for general practice and i'm not doing so well haha

this is the concept im working off:


and here is what i got so far:






i need to keep it under 300 verts. what can i do to improve it so far?

thanks!

Tea Monster

If you are following the concept, he needs to be a bit more cartoony, beef out the chest a bit and define the arms more. A quick paste-over of your render and the character art should give you a good idea of what I mean.

Mike Yevin

as tea asid, the character needs a bit more of a defining silhouette. also i think the pecks look too high