Character - Archer

Karol F

Hi,

Here is high poly sculpt of fantasy designed archer.

It`s still work in progress, so I`d like to ask you what do you think about it before I will start to do retopology.

Lynx

Looks quite nice, but the body proportions are off.

The legs, arms and body look too long, and the head is too small in comparison to the rest of the body.

Maybe you can scale down the lower torso (waist down) and scale up his head to fix it.

System

Agreed on the head being too small, rest looks fine and a cool looking character overall.

Hobowrath

Give him a small melee wep. For example Legoalaus (did i spell that right?) had 2 short swords.

Karol F

Low poly version of Archer. Model has 14 064 triangles. Proportions are tweaked.

What do you think about it?

Quasar

I like the colours and the design overall. The checker pattern is a nice touch, but it's fighting for attention with the high contrast folds. You can try to fix that by reducing the contrast and increasing the checker size a bit.

He's shaping up though. Keep it up!

More critiques:

drelectro

i dont think the extra loops on boots, quiver and lower arms are necessary... there should be no deformation on these parts. others: agreed

Karol F

Quasar - thanks for the helpful feedback.
drelectro - yeap, maybe so many loops on the boots and quiver are not necessary.