Liking the art - Great style for a webcomic! 'Introduction' is a the strongest, the last two comics Reminds me alot of Able and Baker or Boy on a Stick - 'Guy and wacky friend one liners' are a dime a dozen in webcomics so I hope you do more strips with more than one panel!
I really dislike the main characters lack of chin. Coupled with 'holes' for a nose he looks like a freaky brainless idiot. Please hint that he has a lower jaw!
Mmm i never though about anyone really disliking the chinless thing, i guess its something ive developed over the last few months in some of my drawings. So i think its kind of an acquired taste thing. Ill try and make it more prominent as we go without changing the style to much.
As far as the more complex pages, yeah that stuff will be the bulk of it, the first single one was more of a style test and the second one was i just wanted to do a quickie topical comic.
Ive got the next full page one sketched out, ive just got to finish it.
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really nice simple style dude, shall add to favourites
Murph, yep. The style is probably a a cross between my own personal stuff, beartato and scott pilgrim.
New page is up.
I'll get a page with some actual meat to it in the next 2 days.
I really dislike the main characters lack of chin. Coupled with 'holes' for a nose he looks like a freaky brainless idiot. Please hint that he has a lower jaw!
Bookmarked, wanna see more!
Mmm i never though about anyone really disliking the chinless thing, i guess its something ive developed over the last few months in some of my drawings. So i think its kind of an acquired taste thing. Ill try and make it more prominent as we go without changing the style to much.
As far as the more complex pages, yeah that stuff will be the bulk of it, the first single one was more of a style test and the second one was i just wanted to do a quickie topical comic.
Ive got the next full page one sketched out, ive just got to finish it.