Tweaking my demon character

chrilley

Hello,
I am currently tweaking a character for my portfolio and I would love to get some feedback on what I got so far.

When I was making this I had 'first-person shooter enemy' in mind. I'm a fan of Quake and Doom so my character was somewhat inspired from those franchises.

Beauty-shots using Koddeshader:

Wireframe (7850 tris)

and textures(original sizes, 2048x2048 pixels each)

larger shot:

selentic

augh, creepy

ivanushka

Good job man. His teeth are currently too white and pop out significantly from the rest of the creature. It makes the demon appear slightly cartoonish because of this. Try making the teeth discolored in tones of yellow, possibly green. Play around and see what you get. That's my suggestion, anyways.

LRoy

The textures look really muddy. Maybe try to make things a little more defined?

chrilley

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Update: removed my current mipmaps, which for some reason blurred my textures way too much, also yellowed the teeth slightly. Next thing on my list is to look on the textures, mainly the teeth that need some better blending with the rest of the mouth. I will also see what I can do about the muddy textures, any specific part you were addressing or the texture as a whole, LRoy?

bigger shot, no compression:
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/6226/molenew.png

samcole

Maybe add some dirt and grime to his hands and feet, cause those would be getting pretty dirty. The color map looks uniform all the way around, vary his skin color...he's a demon so you can have some liberties with the skin since he isn't a human.