They're a little tricky to crit, as you're evidently going for a very stylised treatment. The anatomy could probably do with a bit of development here and there, but it does depend entirely on what you're wanting them to look like in the end.
well in real life they look like this
and the band's name is the rott childs which obviously is a satire on the fam rothschild. so they should be some kind off rich villains. maybe they're still to "clean". mayba a more "rotten" look is better...
In your first post, the foreheads on all the characters are convex. I see that you are going for a strong temple and brow in your style, but is confusing to see from the front.
The problem I see with these "studies" is that you're not really capturing the "character" of the band members. My suggestion would be to model them somewhat accurately, then stylize them. Do some research on caricatures as well. This will help with your decision making. "what features should i exaggerate, and why?" kind of thing.
A link: http://freshpics.blogspot.com/2009/03/celebrity-caricatures-by-court-jones.html
thx uncle... and actually not really. didn't have time had to do environment art @ work. maybe i was more eager
and still all are WIPS so i sculpt till time is up...
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and the band's name is the rott childs which obviously is a satire on the fam rothschild. so they should be some kind off rich villains. maybe they're still to "clean". mayba a more "rotten" look is better...
another one, this one is for a game in the making at work.
Also, this looks a lot like a friend of mine.
the later one don't really have a convex shape there.
i could clean up the hair line one this one, tends to go a bit convex at the trasition
think this one doesn't have the "problem"
thanks i'll keep an eye on that
A link:
http://freshpics.blogspot.com/2009/03/celebrity-caricatures-by-court-jones.html
here some concept sheets
here's a concept sheet for the naked one (drummer)
one for the RedHead (Singer)
For fatty (bassplayer)
thx uncle... and actually not really. didn't have time had to do environment art @ work. maybe i was more eager
and still all are WIPS so i sculpt till time is up...