plague-bearer character

daphz

My portfolio crusade continues!
I have a lot more little knick-knacks I want to give her, earrings, a nose piercing, one of those holy..smoke dispenser thingies... bracelets and more necklaces. I want to give her tattoos also but she's mostly covered so I don't know if I'll bother.
all comments/crits welcome!

crazyfool

really nice, I really like her design. Anatomy wise she could possibly do with a bit more shaping here and there but as its mostly hidden I say she looks great I would maybe concentrate on making her neck a bit more natural and the shoulder blades also. Shes really really cool though

Nizza_waaarg

thats dope : O (just saw the pic in the waywo thread and had to look for the full version )

really like the textured zbrush anatomy shot, hairstyle rawks. Is the texture mostly flat colour with some colour gradiation in certain bits or more detailed than that? (looks really cool but dunno how you did it:3)

And really like how the outfit is shaping up, headgear especially ^^ only crit i can think of is the folds aren't flowing together as well as they could around the bottom bit on the back of the dress... kinda minor tho
hope you post updates soon

Allan-p

Crazyfool: Even though she might be covered up it is good practice for Daphz

Anatomy wise, she seems on the vurge of a more classical figure which brings me to the point of her hips. They seem a little small, what I learned ( of course this is solely based on the aesthetic values of the artist and varies throughout) s that women from shoulder to shoulder are one and a half heads across and two heads across on the hips and this is opposite for men.

Are you still developing the back?

Other than that it looks absolutely rad mate! Keep it up

daphz

thank yous!

@crazyfool - I softened the neck and tweaked the shoulder blade a bit.

@nizza - yep, the polypaint is mostly gradiation; I filled it all one color, then put some orange on her outer limbs, then put the dirt/paint dark colors in there, then colored her torso a little lighter. Folds are being worked on also!

@allan - I thickened her hips a bit, and made her shoulders a TINY bit less wide.

and now for pics.






(paintover of how I want the designs on the cloth)

*oh I have her an urn thingy.

BreaK

Nice. Looks like the woman out of True Blood. Forget her name. The evil shapeshifting one!

Allan-p

Looking really good mate! It's shaping out really well. The slight adjustments you made, made it all the better.

daphz

still got lots of stuff to tweak, and make hair. here's after taking into account what the peoples in WAYWO said.



I wasn't liking the results i was getting from the 3 point shader, or marmo. so I went with the xoliul shader.

daphz

this is kind of getting on my nerves, playin around with presentation. still got some stuff to fix, and i'm thinking of doing a triptych

Bigjohn

Very nice. I like this one a lot. All those swirly shapes mimicking the smoke, real nice touch on that.

ScudzAlmighty

personally I think you should loose the frame and just present it the way you have in that paintover with the kinda blue/grey background. all the yellow is just sucking you out of the picture which is pretty blurry and hard to read properly.