[WiP] The Dark Carnival

Tepcio

Hi guys!

It's my new environment which I have been working on for the last two months.

Soft used: UDK, Maya, Photoshop, Xnormal



It's a bit too dark but I'm going to fix that.


Short movie:
[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5It5v_8c0k4[/ame]

I'm very sorry for fps but my hardware is too weak for this stuff
I'm going to render final version on better pc though.

SinisterUrge

This is beautiful. One thing pops out at me, its the moon. Its grey colour doesn't match the rest of the scene. Perhaps, a blue or golden tint would do the trick. More variety of rubbish scattered around the place would give the look of a carnival now over.

NothingHappens

That's great.

I noticed one thing in the video : The way the grass moves (simulating the wind) looks like the grass is growing super-fast.

And like SinisterUrge said; the moon looks a little out of the rest.
But I'm not really ok about the blue or golden tint. I think a rusty tint (more "light desaturated orange" than golden), but maybe that's the tint SinisterUrge was thinking about) would be better.

Jessica Dinh

WOW. Your work is so beautiful!!! XD Only thing is the video is a little slow in the beginning - I don't think you need to linger on each scene for so long. I preferred when the camera was moving like toward the mid/end of your video. Inspiring, thank you!

Makkon

Love it! Very moody!
The thing that kept bugging me like crazy, though, was that tarp hanging in the street. It kept obstructing my view and was actually quite distracting. It's not that it's a bad idea, but it's in the way of viewing some major focal points. I'd move it to an un-obstructive location, or take it down.

Striff

I really like the mood you created. However, looking at the pics makes me feel like the whole level is too "noisy". I don't know if its the normal maps your using or what, but there is just too much noise and its hard to focus on any one thing. I like the video a lot.

Tepcio

Thanks for feedback guys!