its pretty nice looking i love the Finding Nemo kinda feel i get from it. very warm
As for the nitty gritty stuff all i can comment at this point (without wires like Camza states) is on the fish movement. there was also a little clipping then they went back into the coral.
as far as the movement Im not sure if you intended it to be really out of proportion or it just happened that way. if there not moving like that on purpose then..
since i work with fish all day long and have several saltwater tanks the one big thing i noticed is the dorsal, pelvic and anal fins are doing a kinda rowing motion (the top and bottom fins) they go forward and then back. That sort of movement suggests the fish is swimming in bursts where as you having them swimming at a constant speed
also its kinda hard to read and maybe i got it wrong but it looks like they are just using the base of their tail to propel them forward. In actual fish they use a lot more of their body to move themselves especially when they turn. fish also tend to use much smaller trail movements and glide alot in the water much like birds do to conserve energy.
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As for the nitty gritty stuff all i can comment at this point (without wires like Camza states) is on the fish movement. there was also a little clipping then they went back into the coral.
as far as the movement Im not sure if you intended it to be really out of proportion or it just happened that way. if there not moving like that on purpose then..
since i work with fish all day long and have several saltwater tanks the one big thing i noticed is the dorsal, pelvic and anal fins are doing a kinda rowing motion (the top and bottom fins) they go forward and then back. That sort of movement suggests the fish is swimming in bursts where as you having them swimming at a constant speed
also its kinda hard to read and maybe i got it wrong but it looks like they are just using the base of their tail to propel them forward. In actual fish they use a lot more of their body to move themselves especially when they turn. fish also tend to use much smaller trail movements and glide alot in the water much like birds do to conserve energy.
The youtube video below illustrates it decently as the fish is moving about the same speed your fish are moving
[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUtajoVi8qw[/ame]
but good work so far deffently got something good here