Scifi Female Thief

d2king10

Hey guys, I have been working on this piece for awhile, and finally managed to finish it just in time (it is due monday for class) :poly142:

Anyhow, it is based on the concept found here (by lian) http://cghub.com/images/view/17201/

Enjoy!









wip images can be found here: http://grungemedia.com/dkseries/My_Work/FemaleScifi/

P442

she is looking elongated. Hands, torso, face look too long

HAL

I think your textures could benefit a lot of a little bit more gloss for the "plastic" materials of that suit, atm it looks a bit like fabric ( is that intended?)

Also how did you create you specularmap? did integrate a lighting direction into it? it looks like that atm... dont use directional lighting in your dynamical lit textures.

Also use the specular map to define material properties e.g. low spec for rubber etc (but high specular exponent (gloss) in your exponent texture)

Also what P442 said, torsos way to long in comparison with the legs

I do like the overall design though, keep it up

roosterMAP

rework the specular and gloss maps to help better differentiate between the materials. Also, somethings wrong wth her face.

d2king10

Thanks for the comments, I have trouble understanding specular maps (I used the varga tutorial for the spec maps). Can anyone explain to me the best way to approach a spec map?

Yeah, I had trouble with the proportions (first female I have ever done), but it looks a lot better than when I started. I will probably fix these images up in a month for finals!

Thanks again. :thumbup:

Cap Hotkill

Your speculars doesn't seem to be working at all... with that specular your model should look shiny and waxy.

ketsi_aiita_n

The speculars look like they should be working. Is it lit oddly?

d2king10

It is because, in Marmoset, you can turn town the specular brightness by hand with a slider.