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MephistonX
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Nov 2010
just some pieces for uni that ive been working on - any critique appreciated :poly124:
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Patackular
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Nov 2010
Heeeey, Dan.
Awesome stuff. Particularly the jeans.
Maybe this might improve your torso.
I think that neck part could be widened and the width of where the ribs are could be broadened, with the hips brought in for a better curve.
Also, I reckon the pectorals are a bit high and pushed out. Should look sweet after that.
Just some stuff I was looking at........for research, that is:
Probably should have suggested this before Day 0.
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MephistonX
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Nov 2010
cheers pat - ill try and sort that out next week - i knew something was wrong with it just couldnt put my finger on it
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Awesome stuff. Particularly the jeans.
Maybe this might improve your torso.
I think that neck part could be widened and the width of where the ribs are could be broadened, with the hips brought in for a better curve.
Also, I reckon the pectorals are a bit high and pushed out. Should look sweet after that.
Just some stuff I was looking at........for research, that is:
Probably should have suggested this before Day 0.