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Villageguard
Nov 2010
A spotlight for that special someone x]
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P442
polycounter lvl 8
Nov 2010
can you post ref?
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Nov 2010
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doeseph
polycounter lvl 7
Nov 2010
Not sure how close you've decided to follow your reference, but here's what I saw right off the back that I thought was noticeable:
1. The ref shows a hollowed out cap, your model version appears to be flat and considerably smaller.
2. 90 degree angle vs smooth corner
3. There's no separation of the front piece and main body on the reference, but there is on yours.
Also don't forget the small metal piece at the top middle of the lense rim, that holds the cover/shield (forgot what the specific name for it is).
Hope you find that useful!
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P442
polycounter lvl 8
Nov 2010
Adding what what Doeseph has pointed out.
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Villageguard
Nov 2010
wow i got comments
heres where im at so far
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1. The ref shows a hollowed out cap, your model version appears to be flat and considerably smaller.
2. 90 degree angle vs smooth corner
3. There's no separation of the front piece and main body on the reference, but there is on yours.
Also don't forget the small metal piece at the top middle of the lense rim, that holds the cover/shield (forgot what the specific name for it is).
Hope you find that useful!
heres where im at so far
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