says the guy with the portfolio full of untextured guns
Really cool design and shape dude, but I dont think the tongue/tail is working yet... maybe try a forked tongue? Maybe some piercings? The silhouette is really interesting up top, but kinda falls apart towards the bottom.
I really like where this is headed, but I agree with Ferg that the bottom half of the character is not as visually appealing as the top half. Keep it up though, you have a lot of potential here
Thanks a lot guys! Ok, just to be clear with this tongue, ill make it bigger, and he is going to use it as a snake uses its tail, you will see, i only need to pose him :P
I preferred it with the woman's(?) arms hanging down as opposed to praying. I think adding some drool or something, even something vile like blood or vomit coming from the mouth would add interest to the giant tongue. I am also fond of the concept of this thing floating around, I think it seems more eerie and unsettling. Please finish this. I love it.
I reminds ME of Xenogears enemies. Those were some of my favorite enemy designs in any game ever made. You are good!
There is something wrong, for me, with the front and side shots of the "tail" thingie. Frontally/ 3 quarters it looks like soft ice if that makes sense. And from the side, it seems too thing somehow.
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Jimmy, i'm definately going to make a scythe, an epic one
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says the guy with the portfolio full of untextured guns
Really cool design and shape dude, but I dont think the tongue/tail is working yet... maybe try a forked tongue? Maybe some piercings? The silhouette is really interesting up top, but kinda falls apart towards the bottom.
I think your really going to have to define the bottom, make the whole thing clearly a tongue and push the mouth Idea.
Otherwise this is a pretty cool character. Gene Simmons would be proud.
Thanks for your crits everyone!
How do you get smooth, straight muscles with a mouse, (I don't have a tablet). I have tried the lazy mouse option but I still get very jagged lines.
Are you still going to complete this model?
I reminds ME of Xenogears enemies. Those were some of my favorite enemy designs in any game ever made. You are good!
There is something wrong, for me, with the front and side shots of the "tail" thingie. Frontally/ 3 quarters it looks like soft ice if that makes sense. And from the side, it seems too thing somehow.
This character I liked most of all in the competition.
All is great - idea, proportions and anatomical details