It will Be my Stuff Here

frwanque

Hey guys, Its been a while I haven't done any 3d, in fact i'm looking for serious Feedback.

Please feel free to say anything about this one i know i can realy do better but that is what happen when you never finish your stuff...

i'm currently on a mission, finishig what I start. IT can be totaly disgusting, il finish it. I encourage all of you doing the same, I know i'm not the only one with this problem.

tanks

vofff

Where's the ref or concept?

frwanque

I just took s boring subject I got bored with it...
I wont do it again
I'll have something beter very soon.

tanks for the reply

Baj Singh

Nice start mate, good ethos as well.

I would have a look at the base of the cart (the wooden part at the bottom of the carriage). At the moment it looks a little like wall plaster instead of wood. Change the hue so that its closer to brown and perhaps add a subtle wood overlay.

Good luck.

frwanque

Hey tanks for the replay I realy didn't expect anyone to come here with that boring subject hehe.

Baj: I thing you are right about everything but I got so bored with this project because of so many mistakes that I'm done with it So i'm not touching it again.

finally with a more interresting subject,I want to fhinish this guy I've did it a couple month ago but never finished it.

yet, I have some problem with it I would like to find a way to put a Volume to my Drape stuff because for now they are only A plane wich bothers me a lot
Do you guys know I I can actualy do it without scraping everything.

feel free to comment

frwanque

Here Is something I started on luch time at work.

It's still some random stuff without exact Idea. I started to texture it today.


Lets call him Elvis

Taylor Hood

Reminds me of Metro Man from Megamind. Pretty cool.

frwanque

Hoo nice I just look at The trailer I gotta see it.
Unfortunatly mine was a complete random thing.

Taylor Hood

Well, it's still pretty awesome, dude =]

Jonathan Marshall

Elvis? He looks more like a "Francis" or "Franko" or even "Dave"

Your carriage looks better than the reference BTW.

dansher

its definitely john travolta as danny from grease

http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://images2.fanpop.com/images/photos/4500000/Danny-Zuko-grease-the-movie-4582326-460-276.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.fanpop.com/spots/grease-the-movie/images/4582326/title/danny-zuko-photo&usg=__CYli34Sjos3yV8bUz_Ng9wpHXBc=&h=276&w=460&sz=29&hl=en&start=0&sig2=d_Vei13Pcj2Rq9fi3CJfVQ&zoom=1&tbnid=GALr3nCW1iNUaM:&tbnh=146&tbnw=186&ei=9LTCTI7RJY6dccex_NcL&prev=/images%3Fq%3Ddanny%2Bfrom%2Bgrease%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26biw%3D1269%26bih%3D783%26tbs%3Disch:1&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=807&vpy=101&dur=313&hovh=151&hovw=251&tx=120&ty=103&oei=9LTCTI7RJY6dccex_NcL&esq=1&page=1&ndsp=24&ved=1t:429,r:4,s:0

frwanque

Ho I just start trying texturing and rendering.
It's not going as fast as I would love to but I'm getting there

frwanque

Mostly Final.

Im a bit stuck now I don't know what I should add.
Give me some feedback or any Idea before i close this one.

cheers

killingpeople

Super cool bust man.
Maybe adding some slight color variation to his skin would help punch it up.
Maybe some tats on his neck.
Some jewelery, or someth'n.
An eyepatch.