[WIP] Ubadah Quereishi - Character

TNO

hope that Romario isn´t disapointed that I post here so early
(I made the clothes in the last 20 minutes so they will suck much )

(this project doesn´t represent any of my opinions about good and evil.
It is just some fictional Stuff and I like to build Caracters so that is all that can be said from my side)

my Main project is still the Fiona Project ;-)

Kewop Decam

you website which is hosting that image keeps asking me for a password on THIS page.

TNO

thx for the info I wasn´t expecting that. the website isn´t mine.
I fixed it.

StealthSilver

Wouldn't untied shoelaces be dangerous in gunfights?

TNO

jup you are more than right.
the game is supposed to be fictional from the story but untied shoelaces would be more than erm stupid.

lampekap

the clothes still don't look right. they simply dont look like cloth, instead they look bobbly and too thick, for example where the pants are supposed to overlap the shoes. the diffrence in size between his lower arms and his hands is too big.
good luck with this project

ParoXum

Seems to me like his head is too big, legs too short and also what lampekap said. I'm not expert in anatomy but I can clearly spot those.

Also, I have no idea how you organize your work, but if this is a sculpted job, you might want to work subdiv after subdiv and not rush into details. Because at the moment your silhouette is bad and volumes are off/flat/angles.

Think every brush stroke you make.

Steve Schulze

What application are you using to model this guy?

TNO

many thanks for the replies. I will change it when I have time again.

@ Jackablade
I use Sculptris 1.02 (it got bought from pixologic in this year)
you can easily reduce the detail where you don´t need it and add where you have to have it.
my second program is Blender (it is for Teturing,Rigging and other stuff)

ErichWK

everything seems incredibly blobby. Almost like you modeled it out of clay. His forearms also have this Popeye type thing going on. Also, if comparing to the concept art... The character is supposed to have sunken in eyes

TNO

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