Portfolio feedback for placements

Phil101

Hi there, I'm doing my 2nd year on a games degree now and I need to start looking for a placement in industry. I have been advised its important to show industry your portfolio when it is up to standard. A tutor of mine said I should come here to post my portfolio and as the people on PolyCount will know if its ready to show to industry.

Thanks for any feedback,
here is the portfolio http://phil101.carbonmade.com/