I think overall its looking good. The muscles in the left arm from the back view look a little odd to me. In regards to the face it does need to be softened up a bit coming across as masculine. Bridge of the nose, cheeks, and eye sockets stand out to me. I cant really say for sure but seems like the eye sockets and cheeks are a bit socken in. Bridge of nose perhaps could be rounded some more. Good Stuff so far.
Crits:
Nostriles are too big, not enough bulb in the tip of the nose.
The indent where the nose meets the browline is kind of missing. I'm not sure if you're going for a Mr Incredible sort of nose but I think adding that indent will make her slightly more attractive.
Features seem pretty strong, just a few hints is all you need.
The lips seem pretty full at the corners of the mouth, probably just shrink that in would give a little pout to her lips. Also the upper lip seems to stick out a bit too far giving her a bit of an overbite, which robs her jawline of strength.
I hope you don't mind but I did a quick paint over of your face to help illustrate my critique.
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Crits:
Nostriles are too big, not enough bulb in the tip of the nose.
The indent where the nose meets the browline is kind of missing. I'm not sure if you're going for a Mr Incredible sort of nose but I think adding that indent will make her slightly more attractive.
Features seem pretty strong, just a few hints is all you need.
The lips seem pretty full at the corners of the mouth, probably just shrink that in would give a little pout to her lips. Also the upper lip seems to stick out a bit too far giving her a bit of an overbite, which robs her jawline of strength.
I hope you don't mind but I did a quick paint over of your face to help illustrate my critique.