Adaro (wip)

MeintevdS

Tully gave me permission to use this drawing. I've been working on it for a while now and figured I'd make a post and see if I could get some C&C.

My model is a bit bulkier around the chest, so I'll have to change that. I also just noticed I completely forgot to put in the gills... The head is still temporary, I have no idea what I'm going to do with it yet, but I'll probably make it less pointy and will probably make it look more like the concept drawing.

Anyway, I'm still very new in zbrush, so any tips or tricks are welcome.

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Tear it apart

Bakayoukai

For me the thing that stands out is the his shoulders dont have enough definition to them, it appears that the deltoid tapers into the arm to much. I would bump it out a bit.

MeintevdS

Fail! Apparently I messed up my centerline, so smart resym isn't working anymore. Soooo I'll have to start over. I'll be sure to give the shoulder more definition like you said. Thanks for the reply