Nice work, that global illumination and ambient occlusion is working out really well for you. Nice balance of colors and palette. All the assets tie together nicely.
I personally like where this is going Pitman I love the rocks and the foliage thats embedded in the rocks, the fern piece i think needs work as well as the scale of your fence posts and fence chainlink texture. With a nice skydome and maybe another prop in the distance around the area where you can see through the hole in the fence (to cover that straight line of where the ground geo ends), it will be a great portfolio piece. Keep it up Im sure there will be a lot of other good crits coming to help you out.
I agree with Shepeiro, some clutter or tonal variation in the ground to provide more of a path would add more interest and draw towards your focal area.
Grey - i agree that the links look large and clunky, a definite change. As for the back there is going to be a broken down trailer back there so that will come soon hopefully.
Shepeiro - The ground is def in need of some love those are actually textures used on some of the rocks, so i have yet to paint a ground tex yet. But adding some dead grass in would help i think.
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i would give the ground a touch more love its quite a focal part and seams a bit dull, larger stones some scrub grass more evidence of walking...
rocks could do with more tonal variation and some more medium details... large(ish sharpe cracks
Kaburan - thanks
Grey - i agree that the links look large and clunky, a definite change. As for the back there is going to be a broken down trailer back there so that will come soon hopefully.
Shepeiro - The ground is def in need of some love those are actually textures used on some of the rocks, so i have yet to paint a ground tex yet. But adding some dead grass in would help i think.