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J-kid
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J-kid polycounter lvl 12
This is a car i made awhile a go which is still not finished but i am thinking of carrying it on


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Critiques are welcome
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  • Hoopla!
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    Hoopla! polygon
    all around kinda sloppy. it kinda looks like the body is made from mash potatoes.

    i think you need to spend more time wrangling in those edge loops to get a more precise feel. take off the smooth and work the base more.
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  • [SF]Three9
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    [SF]Three9
    Hoopla! wrote: »
    all around kinda sloppy. it kinda looks like the body is made from mash potatoes.

    i think you need to spend more time wrangling in those edge loops to get a more precise feel. take off the smooth and work the base more.


    While I agree everything needs to be taken further, I would like to at least point out that you have a nice setup here. Everything that's there seems to be where it should be and such, just feels like it's missing detail and love/attention on the 3d and 2d side
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