Ronin Master

fabmoraes

Hi, everyone.
This is my first post here in Polycount.
I made this samurai in zbrush earlier this year for exercise and now I decided to make a full game character with him. All of the images are screenshots from the 3D Max viewport using Xoliul shader.

He got 10016 triangles including the sword and 10 maps separated in 3 different materials.

In present days I am a 3D artist in advertising industry and also work as character artist freelance but I want to join in a great game company such as Bioware, Ubisoft, Epic,..

Hope you like it.

adam

Moved to Pimping & Previews.

emeryalanlin

looks great man!
maybe add some opacity maps on his clothes to give him more life and damage on the clothes

Will Faucher

To me, it seems like the eyes are a little to high up on the face. They should be level with the tip of the ears. Apart from that, it's looking great! Perhaps the engravings on the blade are a little too pronounced. Blade engravings are usually very, very fine.

Good work!

woogity

looks nice man i think a light fabric overlay on the normals of his shirt could do wonders for it if i had to lay a crit on it, the face is a bit long, but some people have long faces so not really an issue. i like what you have done with the hand guard on his left hand.

Bibendum

Looks great. The frills at the end of his braided belt/rope thing are a lot brighter than the rest of it, especially against the black pants it really sticks out.

Would you mind posting the texture sheets?

fabmoraes

thank you very much for all the critics.
here are the maps

TomDunne

Very minor crit, but in the scenes when he's drawing the sword, he's holding the scabbard (saya in Japanese) upside down. A katana is carried and drawn with the cutting edge up. It's also exceptionally unlikely that he'd draw with his left hand; traditionally, even lefties carry the sword on their left side and draw/fight with their right.

Also, the gauntlet he's wearing on his left hand (kote) ought to be backed against some kind of material, likely wool cloth or leather. Just tying it on like that seems a great way to get some gnarly rope burns

conte

nice work, man!

MoreDread

very nice indeed!
as far as crits go i can only second what TomDunne said and add to it that theres something odd going on with the clavicle area.. i'm not sure if this is an odd muscle i've never seen before, or a definition of the ribcage that is slanted just a little too much.