Hey guys, looking for critiques or comments. Having some difficulties with the face, I'm not used to the ZBrush style workflow, but I'm learning. It seems to be easier with exception to the face.
One thing I notice right away is the rib cage looks a bit too wide at it's base. Bring it in a bit to put a feminine curve on there. But keep it up, it's looking great.
It depends on your ref of course, but two things stick out:
-the T shaped intersection of the ribcage and the abdomen, which should be an arch instead.
-The deltoid area is somewhat undefined, and directly below it there appears to be an odd lump. The pectoralis major does not enter the arm that far to the outside.
There are some other issues, but most of them are hard to crit because there is an overarching lumpiness to the sculpt as frell said. Smooth it out and define the large forms with clear surfaces.
Not bad though, it should shape up if you give it some love.
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-the T shaped intersection of the ribcage and the abdomen, which should be an arch instead.
-The deltoid area is somewhat undefined, and directly below it there appears to be an odd lump. The pectoralis major does not enter the arm that far to the outside.
There are some other issues, but most of them are hard to crit because there is an overarching lumpiness to the sculpt as frell said. Smooth it out and define the large forms with clear surfaces.
Not bad though, it should shape up if you give it some love.