WIP: overweight female

attattattack

Hi, I'm making an overweight female for my demoreel.
I just finished the basemesh but I think I need some more crits and fix before I move on to the sculpt.


The face



This is the hand. I have a triangle near the thumb, and I fixed it by adding a loop that goes through from the hand all the way across the chest to the other hand. Is this a good fix, or is it better to leave that triangle there.



The foot topology


Crits and suggestions are needed and welcomed.
Thanks for looking guys.

Reference is "Romana" from 3d.sk

Baj Singh

It looks ok for a base mesh. I would either optimise the fingers/toes otherwise you will have a lot of unnecessary poly's added down the line during subdivision.

Its also worth adding a relax modifier (if you are using Max, it might be called something different in other programs). This will try and make the poly's all square in size which makes them easier to sculpt in the long run.

attattattack

Baj Singh: thank you for the suggestions. I will also look into the fingers more, guess I was a bit lazy on that.

Smirnoffka

Looks like an overweight male, you need to make the boobs much bigger and droopy.

r_fletch_r

looks awesome for someone so fat they have a pretty defined neck. id maybe fill it out more. Gender wise it read female to me

attattattack

Smirnoffka: Thanks, I'll do something with her boobs (that sounds wrong)
r_fletch_r: good point! I'll work on that

thanks guys!

attattattack

some minor updates what do you guys think?

Raider

Kitteh

still kinda looks like a man

needs sum more curves

Mezz

I think overall the body looks female... I'd just work on the face and arms a bit more. The face is looking kinda baby-fat boy, especially in the mouth/jaw I'd say. And as for the arms, I think they almost look too muscley now. I'd loosen up the forearm, and add a lot more droop in the upper arm.

Torrrtilla

Her shoulders are way too wide, it should be about two heads in width.

attattattack

Kitteh: Thanks man, I agree with you she needs more curve, I'll try to see where I can add them.

Mezz: Those are really useful, I'll fix up the arm, and will fix the jaw.

Torrrtilla: I totally agree, It's weird i never noticed how wide the shoulders are.

Thank you guys I'll get into those fixes now.

attattattack

Fixed the arm, the jaw shoulder and many stuff.

Also sculpted the hair, kinda look weird, but turned out better than I expected.

here are some updates





I will wait for some critiques and fixes then I will start my texture, and the pose.

Thanks guys.

Torrrtilla

hair sculpt looks nice, big improvement all around. (no pun intended) I am curious as to the motivation for this subject, are you planing on designing this character for game? Not to get too nit picky, but I do feel the hands are too small and the forearm needs some more work.

Mezz

Nice, better overall!! Definitely looking more female, imo. I'm loving those giant cellulite knees and ass! Great attentions to detail.