SCIFI Rifle Model

wi_2

Working on making a Sci-fi rifle atm..
It will end up as an ingame model once I'm happy with the highres.
I could use some feedback if anyone has anything to say?

Tnx

Rock Bottom

Looks really interesting but i cant tell if this is going to be a Sniper kind of rifle ore what, and is it going to shoot plasma bullets ore normal? if normal where is the clip? and if this is going to be a sniper i cant see a head rest for a more comfortable position at shooting point... but besides that Looking good keep it up

n88tr

I think what hurts it the most is that it's too thin and flat to some degree. There doesn't seem to be an overall style that holds it together, seems pretty random.

wi_2

Rock Bottom : I don't rly think about what it will shoot.. probably lasers or plasma or so.. just want to make it look cool, Thnx for the feedback!

n88tr : Yes you are right, I will work on that.. especially the overall style thing...Thnx for the feedback!

AsaNYC

I personally like the like the style of it, but I think it could use a dash of additional details to make it seem natural. Some ergo or texturing on the grip and at least a fore grip or barrel-shroud kinda-grip at the front to stabilize it. And I'd also second the motion by others here that there should be something to rest your cheek on even if it's just removing the bits that stick out on each side of the receiver rear.

wi_2

little update.. still working on the texture

dejawolf

i like it. it has a very fishlike aerodynamic smoothness to it.
are you going to put some optics and stuff on the picatinny rails?

ES_139

i like this mate, it looks like the kind of gun id enjoy using in a sci fi shooter. It has a kind of dirty space feel to it which im very much a fan of, simple shapes but still obviously different from current technology also it uses recognizable shapes from current weapon. Cant wait to see it finished with a nice spec map.

wi_2

update.. went back to modeling stage

zxcman

this is so rocking modeling. well done!

shinobix

I really like the additions you made in the new 'back to modeling' phase. What about adding the cocking lever to it as well? Also where do the expended shells eject from?

JGcount

The textures save it for me. Donno what that means.

The modeling is solid and so is the texturing - I think you should name it the BF "shark" 1.0

n88tr

has that mass effect look to it. alien-ish too. lack of modern features like trigger, accessories make it look even more alien.

Firebert

n88tr wrote: »

lack of modern features like trigger

my mind exploded.... what?!?



nice modeling wi_2 and good start on the textures. keep rolling dude.

fearian

I love the style!

Jonathan Marshall

I wasn't feeling it at first... but once I saw it textured, I like it a lot.