[WIP] Production document - Bombard (2D)

LosPescados

Hello all, we've gotten the school assignment to create a game design document of a medieval siege weapon with props and everything.
I have chosen to create a bombard and would like some feedback on what I have so far.

Model sheet bombard:



Production sheet bombard:

-still needs to be done-

Model & production sheet props:





Model & production sheet character:

-still needs to be done-

LosPescados

still a WIP, gonna add the front view on the left and the materials.
Might change the character to a more detailed one later on, the flag is also a placeholder.
Also still need to add the instructions

LosPescados

After having a day of the project and having a fresh look at the project I've made some changings into the design.

KyleJensen

If this cannon has huge recoil, you're going to want to give it something to anchor itself to the ground.

LosPescados

Thanks Shad0wForce, was planning on putting some blocks behind the wheels but that wouldn't have been effective enough.

small update:

arrangemonk

DAMNIT!

LosPescados

another update, need to change the blueprint again and then up to the weapons and characters.

LosPescados

Some characters that will operate the machinery:




EDIT: a speedpaint to give a mood , wish I had more time.