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TF2 - Polypack - Puffstoole

I don't have much experience modelling, so I've no delusions of winning this contest, but I thought it would be fun to try something anyway.

Sniper's Long Haul

Stuff falls apart. It happens. Sometimes, that stuff is vital to your survival. Those engineering types
are pretty good at fixing it, as long as there's a healthy supply of metal. But what if there isn't? Like, for example, in the middle of the Australian Outback, 1000 kilometres from any civilization? You fix it up with whatever you findlying around. It doesn't have to look pretty if it still gets the job done.

On one of Sniper's longer jobs, most of his stuff broke. All of it, actually, and he had to fix it then and there.When he got back, he bought brand new weapons and packed up the old stuff. Well, now he's dusted off three old favourites and spruced them up, ready for the battlefield once again!

Introducing three brand-new old items, straight from the bottom of the scrap heap! Poorly maintained and horribly repaired, these items are sure to confuse your enemies long enough to tear them a new one!

The Outback Carbine!
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Made from a salvaged rifle, the Outback Carbine might be a little heavy, and the scope a little smaller than the original, but that doesn't mean you can't put a decent hole in anyone stupid enough to get in your sights.

The Cuppa!
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This thermos has seen Sniper through many long nights, and has certainly seen better days. Great for perking you up after a long night of keeping a sharp eye out, and your mates will love it when you douse their flames with it!

The Bundy!
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Sometimes a machete just won't cut it. Sometimes, you need something bigger, meaner and pointier. Straight from NorthQueensland, the Bundy will strike fear into any sneaky Frenchman who crosses your path!"

Replies

  • Spontaneous Spic Weasel
    Um dude,
    1. Moari are from New Zealand, the sniper's an Auzzie...
    2. Waka are Moari canoes/boats...
    3. You got one right! =) Moko are a tribal face tattoo.

    Soz about this but, well im a kiwi (form New Zealand) and well we have a friendly but strong rivalry with the Auzzies =P
  • Puffstoole
    The story behind the items is that he travelled around the world and got the items on the way, so it's possible he picked up a Maori mask. In regards to the 'Waka", I guess wikipedia's not the best place to look this stuff up :/

    I'm Aussie, by the way :P
  • adam
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  • Puffstoole
    Ok, after actually reading the rules properly -

    Three new weapons:
    Outback Carbine - replaces the Sniper Rifle
    Swagman's Canteen - replaces Jarate
    Caneknife - replaces Kukri

    sniperweapons2.png

    Still using the Sniper's weapons as a base, I've changed my theme to "Bush Mechanic", repairing things with whatever you have on hand. The bayonet on the rifle is attached by wire, the handle of the cane knife is taped together and the canteen's cover is covered in patches, for example.
    "Do you like fighting close and dirty? Tired of being unsatisfied of your kills because you can't hear them scream? Are you fighting on an empty stomach? Then the Bush Mechanic set is for you!

    Celebrate Australia's proud military history with the Outback Carbine! You won't miss your old scope after gutting a few bogans with the razor sharp bayonet!

    Is the machete too short and not pointy enough for you? The Caneknife's weight and length makes it ideal for taking out those sneaky spies in a single hit. You can't swing it too fast, though, so make it count!

    Jars of urine are all well and good, but true outback types pack a hearty lunch! Enter the Swagman's Canteen, full of a thick soup made from a 'borrowed' sheep! Drink it when you're feeling a bit low, or throw it to put out a fire. Your mates will thank you for it!

    Call Mann Co. today to receive your Bush Mechanic set today!

    *Some assembly required."
    I'll try to get the Caneknife model done by tomorrow, at least a rough version. And yeah, I know the canteen sill looks very, very bad, but I'm too tired to fix it tonight :P

    Thoughts? Questions? Tips?
  • Puffstoole
    caneknife.png

    Cane knife so far. Wanted to get the shape down before I started putting any details in. The blade itself will be heavily chipped, and where the handle and blade meet will be wrapped in tape.

    Any thoughts or critiques before I start putting in the details?
  • Steve Schulze
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    It's a good choice. Almost makes one wonder why Valve went with the Nepalese Kukri instead of something a bit more inherently Australian.

    Perhaps put a hole through the blade for hanging or some such to make that big expanse of flat metal a little more interesting.
  • MacD11
    make cantine have teamcoloured-nylon covers and a strap so it looks like the sniper has it on the side of his leg when it isnt out,then it will be a definite get for me.

    and for extra eye candy,rinkles on the nylon
  • Puffstoole
    Update on the caneknife:
    caneknife2.png

    To Jackablade: thanks for the hole idea, I think it works well.

    To MacD11: I'm not sure if it's possible to make it stay on his leg. If it is, it's beyond my capabilities :P

    The beige part near where the blade meets the handle is a wrap of some kind, probably bandages. It'll be more obvious when it's textured :P. Also, I was thinking of winding some wire around the handle, above the spot where his hand grips it, or maybe more tape on the actual spot he holds.

    C and C?
  • Karkasmolenklok
    Your cane-knife thingy looks a lot like the old long-handled version of the Woodsman's pal
  • Puffstoole
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    Outback Carbine WIP to prove I'm not dead :) Decided to add a scope, otherwise it won't forfill the rules.
  • Puffstoole
    Getting closer to finished. Started back at uni this week, so I haven't had much time to work on it. It's getting close to the 8000 limit, so I don't think I'll put the bayonet on the front. Still have the scope, bolt and trigger to finish.
    outbackcarbine.png

    I haven't done a texture for it, the colours are just 3DS Max's basic colour coding system. Anything you like/dislike? Constructive critism appreciated :)
  • Puffstoole
    Updated first post with models
  • komfyrion
    Uhm, I've read this thread before, and the first post getting edited was really confusing, but what's done's done.
    Anyway, I think the rifle could get roughed up a bit. Most of body is whole and there's just a few things that implies that its makeshift/broken. I reckon you only are at a rough stage, and have not yet proceeded to details, but a few cracks and loose screws and such would help alot. The Machete thingy is coming along nicely, as well as the jarate thingy. Keep at it!:thumbup:
  • Khthon
    I agree with Kom on roughing up the rifle more for your 'repaired stuff' look.
  • Puffstoole
    I'm redesigning the rifle, mostly because I had no idea what I was doing the first time around. I've got a new design for the butt, so I figured I'd ask you guys.

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    First is my current design, second is Sniper's actual rifle and third is the new. It's modelled after a metal strut and is bolted on similar to the first design.

    Should I do one like the first and second models, or something similar to the third?
  • komfyrion
    That looks like a good idea, it seems more homemade, and it differs greatly from the original design! Let's see how it looks with the gun, and then we'll know for sure what needs fixing/doing.
  • Puffstoole
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    Here's a better shot of the butt with the halfway rebuilt Carbine. What do you think, should I do it in thise style or do something similar to the original?
  • komfyrion
    Hmmm not sure, a makeshift barrel and the scope duct-taped on the barrel on something? Also, you should smooth up the end of the wood on the stock at the bottom.. If that made any sense.. Anyway keep working!
  • Puffstoole
    Had alot of work for uni, so I've only just finished remaking the carbine model.
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    It comes in at just under 2900 tris, considerably lower than my first try (over 8000). The thing wrapped around the scope is going to be an dirty old can, probably team coloured Bonk!. Any c&c before I unwrap it?
  • komfyrion
    Nice! Definitely coming together! Make sure his fingers don't clip through the bolts in the stock. May I also mention that the scope looks too perfect? You could make scratches and stuff in it, and the way its fastened looks like its made with pre-made components.
  • Puffstoole
    I think it's pretty clear at this point I'm going to run out of time to finish off my entry. Uni work had to come first, and I had far less spare time than I thought I would. I will try to finish off the carbine, though.
    Anyway, I've just finshed unwrapping the carbine and laying down some base colours.

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    I tried to stick to the official colours, but none of them really fit the scope, and I'm not sure the colour that's on it is right. What do you guys think?

    P.S., I'm willing to bet that the bolts on the handle clip the Sniper's hand, but I couldn't get Gui Studio MDL to work so I could check in game. Oh well.
  • Ikimono
    good luck...3 days left :O
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