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[updated portfolio] Franck Martin

downarmy
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Hi all

I just updated my demo reel whit a new Aircraft, i am also redoing the main animation but its not done at the moment so i just put in the turntable...

just looking for crits and feedback on my whole website thanks

http://www.fm3d.info

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  • ZacD
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    ZacD ngon master
    You didn't put the aircraft in your portfolio part of your site.
  • vofff
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    vofff polycounter lvl 10
    your demo reel contains only two stuff, and probably last 2min. It is too much you should put in your ak47 and other stuff to fill it out.
  • low odor
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    low odor polycounter lvl 17
    Your models are pretty good, but your textures bring everything down a significant notch

    on the T34 for instance you specular values seem way to high and glossy

    IMG_2608.jpg

    Adding and AO map into your diffuse might help a bit. Also, whenever I am doing a color map, I consider my model and where the color (paint) is going to be abused by its environment and correct it accordingly (i.e. the treads on your T34 are going to have gone through mud and muck and such, so they are not going to have a glossy sheen) I would try to find some examples of good specular maps and try to emulate their results http://www.gameartisans.org/dominancewar/3/index.php
    The lighting study section just strikes me as an unfinished scene
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