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Hey I just finished my Sophmore year as a Game Art Major at LCAD. This was a class assignment for Autodesk.

The theme was a post-apocalyptic world where mankind lived underground due to a nuclear fallout. Scientists created a science-research vehicle (The Arch II) to send back up to collect vapor and ground samples.

I chose an abandoned New York for my scene.

The project is already over, so I'll post up the final scene and w/e I have for the vehicle and street scene.

Everything was modeled, textured, and placed by me using 3dsmax, Photoshop, and the Unreal Development Kit (UDK).


Here is the reference that I used for my scene. It was done by Mikolaj Dobrucki for a public photoshop tutorial :

Duong_Reference.jpg

Here is my final scene Rendered in UDK:

Duong_Kevin_Scene_UDKRender1.jpg

I kinda want to crop my render so that it is similar to the reference, but since it was just a screenshot, I don't really know how to do so. If anyone knows, I'd appreciate it if you let me know.


Here is my vehicle rendered in 3dsmax - some with and without its windows.

Duong_Vehicle_Render.jpg

Duong_Vehicle_Render1.jpg

Duong_Vehicle_Render2.jpg

Duong_Vehicle_Render4.jpg

Duong_Vehicle_Render5.jpg


Here is the lowpoly model of the Arch II

Duong_Vehicle_Autodesk4.jpg

and the lowpoly model with normal information projected

Duong_Vehicle_Autodesk1.jpg

Here are the maps for the Arch II (used multi-sub object):

Duong_Vehicle_Maps_Compilation.jpg

These are the buildings that I made for the scene:

Duong_Buildings_Compilation.jpg

I'm going to take some screen shots of my individual buildings, props, and terrain textures and will update soon.

It's finally been a year since I was introduced to 3D, so I still have a lot to learn. Any feedback would be awesome.


Kevin Duong

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  • SouthpawSid
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    SouthpawSid polycounter lvl 7
    pretty cool, I really like the whole execution in this project. Were you in a D.Ott class when you did this asset?
  • PredatorGSR
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    PredatorGSR polycounter lvl 14
    Really cool stuff. I actually like your final render better than the concept :). I think you could have done some more foliage with better placement to improve the composition.
  • KevinDuong
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    Hey guys, thanks for comments.

    SouthpawSid - this project wasn't for Don's class. I was in his class last semester, but am really hoping to take it again as independent studies. None of this would have happened if it wasn't for him!

    PredatorGSR - I will definitely take that into consideration. Everything in UDK was done in 1 night as I was teaching myself the program haha... Now I have all summer to really polish it up.
  • Mechadus
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    Hey Kevin - nice work. It shows you put a lot of effort into this. Ged just helped me with a screenshot issue, and I think the same thing will work for you. In the unreal console there is a command called "tiledshot" that basically generates huge screenshots. You could just have it render you a 6x scale screenshot which would give you plenty of resolution to crop it into a nice portrait image like the ref. Hope it helps.

    -Nick
  • Snader
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    Snader polycounter lvl 15
    What's the purpose of the giant needle?
  • SouthpawSid
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    KevinDuong: yeah man your style looked as if He'd taught you. reason is as I look at your work it reminds me of mine, and I agree, I attribute a lot of my game art knowledge to the 11 short weeks I spent with him.
  • chrisradsby
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    chrisradsby polycounter lvl 14
    Really nice work man, I like it a lot!
  • KevinDuong
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    Mechadus - Awesome advice man, I'm pretty sure that will do the trick!

    Snader - The needle is a hydraulic based ground sampler. If the vehicle was rigged, it would ideally extend the arm out where it wouldn't harm the wheels, rotate it towards the ground and slam it through the surface, thus taking the samples. On the other side is a pretty simple vapor sampler which just let's w/e is in the air float in, then it closes. Probably will update the jpgs with descriptions of each part. Hope that clarifies things for anyone wondering.

    SouthpawSid - couldn't agree with you more, I take it as a big compliment :) It's just a damn shame I didn't get to show him this in person before school got out. I know he roams polycount though, so hopefully he'll take a look :P
  • Ghostscape
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    Ghostscape polycounter lvl 13
    This whole vehicle is really boxy.

    I think you'd gain a ton from finding a way to pose and rest the needle such that it doesn't point forward, but instead looks "stowed," making it kind of evocative of a tied-down whip antenna or something.
  • Ott
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    Thanks for the props guys ;) Kevin, not too bad for your second semester using Max ;)

    Now, onto the asshole tearing:

    The grass and green shit all along the buildings are far too uniform to make sense. It would generally be heavier near the bottom and work it's way up if it were this thick. I know you are doing this modularly, but even some of the exact same building panels near the top with NO green shit all over it would give the illusion of growth.

    You should also have foliage cards or geometry you can place to help improve the transition, as well as vertex painting would make a huge difference over the exact same building piece with the exact same amount of green.

    The streets need more debris. Where did the trash, plastic bottles, aluminum cans, etc. go? That sort of stuff lasts a really long time and would still be around. The sheer physics of what happens to buildings after 20-100 years of decay is that eventually they will simply break down and fall apart upon themselves. LOTS of trash and debris would still be around even still after this time period.

    I highly suggest you add http://www.opacity.us/ to your library of references. This site is a goldmine when it comes to urban decay. At the very bottom make sure you look at "Archived Sites".

    I really, really don't like those tires. A tire is an object that could be used for other purposes or vehicles, so there is no reason you could't simply make a badass tire as a separate object and texture and use those. Check out this tutorial over at 3dtotal.com and use it as a reference for some ideas of a good looking tire:

    http://3dtotal.com/team/Tutorials_3/tyre_modelling/tyre_modelling_01.php

    Your textures feel very first pass. I see some AO, some Crazybump-age in there, some edge scratching here and there, but that's about it. Needs another pass at rust and dirt buildup in the cracks and corners, a better yellow metal base texture, paint chipped away revealing the bare metal underneath, getting a nice glass shader to actually work (snicker) etc.

    Now that the demands of that class are out of the way, you could either take this even further or take what you have learned for your next scene / vehicle. Don't go 16 weeks next time before putting it up on polycount either :poly118:
  • KevinDuong
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    Hey Don, sorry for not replying, I read your post, but then PolyCount updated and I couldn't get on till now. Thanks for the advice and tips. The uniformity of the ivy did cross my mind, but I didn't have the time to go back and retexture the buildings. Same goes for the trash and debris, although I do plan on creating some for future projects, and when I do, I'll definitely drop them in. The links are really helpful, and my next set of tires will be much better :)

    Kevin
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