Sketchbook: Saiainoshi
polycounter lvl 9
So I'm taking a bold stride by making one of these. I rarely do art outside of work. The stuff I do make, I hardly finish...BUT I have been trying to push myself to do more. Nehoo here's a few of my latest..crits are welcomed!! 
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I really dig the way you handled the eyes the most here. Very big and stylish. The thick lashes and eyebrows really do some fun things for the overall expression. You've also got some very nice lost and found edges in there as well. Things that jumped right out are..
1. Forehead / Hairline - Hard to describe, but it feels a bit like the hair line is too high or receding. You handled this on your Night Elves tho. Might not have made it to that part yet on this one.
2. Ears - Looks like your struggling with picking the view a bit. Definitely could use some cleaning up. I have no room to talk here, I usually just cover them with hair.
3. Hair - Speak of the devil, try and have some more fun when it comes to hair. When painting women especially, so much energy can be added by throwing in some ooh la la.
That's about it really. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.