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Here's my newest lil' project. a constipated mechanized head in a jar.

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Head will be an old war vet. jar head.
The sculpt is still really rough.
Any thoughts and or crits before i really get the ball rolling?
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  • chrisradsby
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    chrisradsby polycounter lvl 14
    You should really work on the shape of the head more, there are a lot of problems right now, but they are quite easy to fix. Go back 1-2 subdivisions and work the shape. Right now it resembles a human head but it has a wierd shape, back of the neck and top of the head is the most obvious ones I think. The nose looks a bit wierd and is not as defined as it could be at this point.

    I really dig the robot-walking thingie though, nice work.
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  • A.Kincade
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    A.Kincade polycounter lvl 9
    Yeah the head needs some work. The suit has some potential. When ever I see a head in a jar I always think about Futurama. :)
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