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Russian Spy

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Hello,


As always when I finish a piece of work I think its great, but with some C & C I later figure out it can be improved in places. Feedback will be greatly appreciated as always.

Thanks in advance

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  • SinisterUrge
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    spy-face.jpg

    upper-body.jpg

    trousers.jpg

    Some of the high poly renders made in zbrush
  • Matroskin
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    Matroskin polycounter lvl 11
    good beginning.

    Her feet and hands feel short imo (well, feet for sure :) )

    Don't forget woolen hat ;)
  • insaneklown89
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    Good start, but your anatomy needs a little tweaking. So the anatomy in your head is a little off, the nose needs to be a little longer, as does the chin. The cheek bones a little masculine, and need to be softened. Where the back of her head connects to her neck seems to thick. Her eyes need to be pulled back a bit, as does her lower lip and chin area. I'm not sure whose face you were using as reference, but that is just my opinion of things that need changing. Also what Matro said is right the feet and hands need to be a little longer, and the boots need to have there form reworked. It doesn't look like a foot would fit comfortably.

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