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[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VtOCMICHMPk[/ame]

its based on an old old rock song i'll try an get a link to it,

written recorded and video made this morn, everything by me
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video is just a lot of google pics

she's 99 lbs of dynamite
and oh what a lovely sight
when she kisses and holds me tight
shes like 99 lbs of dynamite

my baby isa good to me
a real package of tnt
when she squeezes with all her might
she;s like 99 lbs of dynamite
ch

i want the world to know
i love my baby so
theres no danger if i take it slow
i handle her with all the care i know

she's 99 lbs of dynamite
shes got the fuse, i've got the light
goina be with my baby tonight
whos 99 lbs of dynamite

solo

my baby is a good to me
a real package of tnt
when she squeezes with all her might
she;s like 99 lbs of dynamite

cho

i want the world to know
i love my baby so
theres no danger if i take it slow
i handle her with all the care i know

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  • JasonLavoie
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    JasonLavoie polycounter lvl 18
    Hahahaha... love the vocal styling man!

    Video is fucked :P

    Edit: Just lstened to it a couple times... and yuh, I fackin love this song man, I can easily hear this on a cd... which means you mofo's have GOOTTTA get an EP out!!!
  • Rhinokey
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    Rhinokey polycounter lvl 18
    i've learned that my singin sounds better when i turn the mic sensitivity down low so i have to scream , also i've learned i'll never be a great lead player so i've just started writing simple really short leads,, i think it fits well into the song tho. overall pretty happy with it,, the drums and bass are using midi instruments,
  • JasonLavoie
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    JasonLavoie polycounter lvl 18
    Yuh man, I'm always afraid of the more "lead" roles when I write... I just don't have the skillset yet. I mean I can write some small lead parts, but I'm much more comfortable in a rhythm role (bass background may be because of that).

    Either way, I really dig the song / style of your music man, sounds like you're having a crazy fun time!
  • Rhinokey
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    Rhinokey polycounter lvl 18
    [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7RsLJbDdkE[/ame] this morings endevor

    I dont wanna fuss
    i dont wanna fight
    all i wanna do is party tonight
    pick you up early
    we'll stay out late
    whats that? your dad says be home by 8?

    your old man is such a drag
    he dont know bout the fun we have
    thats ok
    it'll be fine
    i'll take you home at 8
    then sneak you out at 9

    theres goina be a party tonight
    music and beer and chicks allright

    workin all week
    tryin to survive
    punchin the clock
    yea 9 to 5

    goina call my gang
    and call my girl
    tell her get her best dress
    we're goina whirl

    all cooped up
    lookin for release
    i hope no one
    calls the police

    its goina be wild its goina be loud
    its not goina be over till dawn
  • achillesian
    your voice kind of reminds me of the dead milkmen
  • Rhinokey
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    Rhinokey polycounter lvl 18
    [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OdiJsAQsTY8[/ame]

    one more,, cover of an old bill halley and the commets tune, the videos take a long time so i'm gettin lazy an just repeating a lot more.

    lyrics
    Last night I was dreamin'
    Dreamed about the H-Bomb
    Well the bomb-a went off and I was caught
    I was the only man on the ground

    There was-a 13 women and only one man in town
    Thirteen women and only one man in town
    And as funny as it may be
    The one and only man in town was me
    With 13 women and me the only man around

    I had 2 gals every morning
    Seein' that I was well fed
    And believ-a you me, one sweetened my tea
    While another one buttered my bread

    Two gals gave me my money
    Two gals made me my clothes
    And another sweet thing bought me a diamond ring
    About forty carats I suppose

    Well, 13 women and only one man in town
    There was-a 13 women and only one man in town
    It was something I can't forget
    Because I think of those 13 women yet
    Well-a 13 women and only one man around

    I had 3 gals dancin' the Mambo
    Three gals ballin' the jack
    And-a all-a the rest really did their best
    Boy they sure were a lively pack

    I thought I was in Heaven
    And all of these angels were mine
    But I woke up and I ended the dream
    'Cause I had to get to work on time

    Well-a 13 women and only one man in town
    There was-a 13 women and only one man in town
    No I can't tell where I've been
    'Cause I kinda think that someday I'll go back again
    To those 13 women and me the only man around

    Well-a 13 women and me the only man around
    Well-a 13 women and me the only man around
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