~~~ Apricotian Lion "Toon" W.I.P.
polycounter lvl 14
Hi here goes the short series i'm currently working on
hanging all other projects and trying to concentrate on this specific one ...
ok , this character is meant for funny short clips , and funny stills
:thumbup: ...
a lot of hilarious scenes are on my notebook now ,
mainly it's going to be in Arabic narrated by me , also there will be a wife , family , neighbours , others such as thieves, policeman , peasant , etc ...
any idea for making funny clips or criticism is accepted and needed , thanks .
edit : to know how he would sound like <poor old animation> , here ...
hanging all other projects and trying to concentrate on this specific one ...
ok , this character is meant for funny short clips , and funny stills
:thumbup: ...a lot of hilarious scenes are on my notebook now ,
mainly it's going to be in Arabic narrated by me , also there will be a wife , family , neighbours , others such as thieves, policeman , peasant , etc ...
any idea for making funny clips or criticism is accepted and needed , thanks .
edit : to know how he would sound like <poor old animation> , here ...
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example :
the lion enters a shop of shawarma(1) ,
and says < Enduk Knafa(2) ? > , which means < do you have Knafa ? >
Shawarma : Chicken Meat
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d4/Shawarma_ad_Istanbul_%2801.10.2008%29.JPG
Knafa : kind of Sweets ..
a non eastern man wouldn't consider it funny , but it is funny !! ...
now that's an example .
nice start however...
i don't like the fur ... so ...
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still needs a lot of amendments , but it is the final exams period !!! .
The base and the tip of the hair should not be made of the same color. Darken the base and lighten the tip and put some color variation between them if you want (the tip should be less satured)
I suppose the light need some works too, the fur looks too bright to me and should generate a darker AO. Fur specular needs some works too because it's really important and is kinda lacking on your pics.
Also your method of doing fur looks pretty strange to me. I think you should fully modeling the body, head and neck ( I suppose you didn't looking at the screens) and then add the fur
Last thing, the hair itself looks way too long to me
Hope it helps, good luck with your exam and your fur
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dance party ..
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PS : how can i make funny sounds like these , what software ?
black holders will be deleted , hair will be brushed , feet will be corrected , bye
lions, cartoony or not, never have their noses the way you've made it.
same here, dude, same here!
without fur, that lion covers everything. should look perfect on the night sky background)
i don't understand , what are you trying to say ?
lets hope you understand this drawing, otherwise I might join the others
personally I just think 3dguru needs to get down on the ground and start to get a hang of things, like how to handle the internets.