Hey guys finally got a working website up and running and was wondering if i could get some feedback on it, layout, content, and whatever else you fancy to critique would be helpful. As of right now the one problem that i know of that I'm fixing later is the resolution on my resume is really large and takes a long time to load. But besides that if anyone can share some info on what could be done different to be or appealing to employers please let me know. Thank for your time.
www.BradleyWascher.com
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Portfolio is good stuff but a little small, 3 pieces. I would work on getting more stuff up there to show. Also if you have any experience in painting or other digital media I'd show that off too.
The Zombie SUV is awesome, definitely your best work on display. The X-plosion hallway peice is alright, but not particularly exciting atm, but seeing as though it's a wip, we'll see what you come up with.
Keep it up.
to me the link pictures could be smaller
love the zombie suv
keep up the good work
*my bad you already said something about this, but try .gifs it might help!
As for your work I really dig the Zombie Suv however there are some issues I have with that piece. I think your SuV can benefit from a bit more high frequency details such as bolts as suggested by the several custom fitted anti zombie panels you have mounted everywhere. The bumper lacks a lot of mounting components as well such as straps or bolts, things like that.
Like everyone else suggested the first bomb env piece is a bit clean and lacks some primary focus.
Either way your portfolio is off to a great start, I would suggest you just keep pushing the pieces. Good luck!
i quite like the zombie SUV, but I agree it needs a tad to really polish it off.
"To obtain a position as a 3D modeler / environmental artists at a company where i can show my passion, ability to learn, and commitment through my art and and people skills"
"People skills" is old... It's a very textbook response and some people find it annoying and really cookie cutter.
Capitalize the "i"
For your Software, I would just say "Photoshop current" don't say "and below" because it really doesn't matter.
I've talked to plenty of people that 1 worked at gaming companies as HR and 2 actually worked at a gaming company as a 3d modeler and what I said is basically all relayed from them.