The_old_republic_character_WIP

zxcman

Hi all!starting new character here!

P442

all I see is a plain bust, and although well done, I don't get any sense as to what your character is about

zxcman

there are some problems and i cant show you armour.
wait for some time friends and i will show you some full body character

zxcman

Hi all!here is update of my fan art!

Sauron

you're going well, my frend, keep it cool

uneditablepoly

Looking very nice there! I can't wait for The Old Republic to come out. I'll be watching this thread to see where it goes. Keep it up!

JasonLavoie

Anyone else feeling that maybe the torso is a bit too short? It could be the chest / crotch that could be throwing me off though.

Looks great either way.

Gallows

The legs do look a bit too long for that torso, but the model itself looks so good. Got a texture working?

roosterMAP

I love the chest plate! I really like how its all one piece. makes it look simple, yet futuristic. good job!

zxcman

thx for your C&C.here is 70% baked model
and just began texturing

zxcman

texturing upd.

LoTekK

Nice texture work! Head looks great, but those arms and hands need upsizing. Sizewise, your typical hand will roughly cover your face, and with your arms down by your sides, your fingertips should reach roughly halfway down the thigh. Feet look a bit dainty as well. Not super keen on the armor, though, especially the arms, which seem quite plain. The scratches on the kneeguards aren't really doing it for me, either. If theyre scratches from wear and tear, they should extend all the way to the upper edge.

zxcman

Thx mate.i used your advices)here is the result

ZacD

turn big head mode off.

zenarion

I must disagree with the breastplate. It looks really uncomfortable, and would interfere with the characters arms if he would stretch them forward.

Forgetful

I like, but his face seems too shiny. I don't know if you used a seperate specularity map for his face, but I would recommend amping that brightness down a lot.

zxcman

thx guy.trying to use your replies

zxcman

any suggestions?

uneditablepoly

In the latest picture it looks like you reduced the width of the breastplate, did you? If you did, good, haha. It was almost to his arms before. It would limit mobility. But yeah, I like how it's looking right now.

One thing, I don't get a sense of solidity with the armor. Wherever there's an end to it and you can see inside, it's just really thin. It looks like he made it out of sheet metal or something.

zxcman

hi polycounters!here is final image.

conte

nice work, dude. as you said on other site, it is just matter of experience to get much higher- keep going and you'll get profit.
looking forward to your next piece. cheers.

Alberto Rdrgz

that texture needs way more love.

Asteric

I think you went a bit overboard on the upper arm plates with the scratches, might juts be me but it seems a bit over-done.