Captain Blue W.I.P

AaronF3D

Hey all, here is a new character i am working on.

First and foremost i would like to give credit to Jose Salcedo who created the concept and model sheet for this character.





I will be posting updates and as usual comments and crits are appreciated!


Also i am aware the back needs some work that will be taken care of immediately.

ZacD

pay more attention to the topology, the shoulders geometry is way to dense and not ideal for animation.

BeserK

Bunch of unneeded geometry around the feet as well, and the wait if you plan on animating this guy!
Nice start though!

Gallows

I think the shoulders should be a bit beefier, right now the chest is a little overpowering. But the design and concept is sick man.

arrangemonk

the head reminds me of that:

Rhinokey

http://wiki.polycount.net/Shoulder_Topology check out this thread for tips on shoulders

AaronF3D

Hey guys thanks for the advice!

Here is a update

Changes- Shoulder topology, reduced polys on foot, Animation friendly topology

AaronF3D

Here is an update of the topology




Head



Render





Critique and comments appreciated.

Cyrael

I like it but i feel like it lost something in the transition from 2d to 3d, i feel like the arms should be pushed down further, in the sketch he's got a really defined trapezius muscle, but you kind of lose that a bit in the 3d model.. also I would widen the thighs a bit, not too much but they're too skinny right now (that may be a bit of a personal preference - but even for a stylized look they're a bit to small. Lastly for animation purposes I'd get rid of that stiffness in the fingers, bend your own fingers slightly and see what happens, its not really possible to only bend the end of your fingertips (I've only known one or two people ever who coud actually do it) so I'd say add another slight bend at the first knuckle and loosen up the bend at the second.. but its definitely really cool, I dig it a lot

Baddcog

Pretty cool. I think the arms could use more shape though. Pinch em down alot in the elbow region, make the biceps stick out on the front of the arms more.

AaronF3D

Alright thanks guys more changes to come