"Heal"
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Hi,
I’m really glad to meet you guys and post my work here. Currently, I’m looking for a job such as 3D Character, Prop Modeler position. If you interested in my work, please contact me through www.conceptman.com
This work is my thesis project; title is “Heal.” I want to tell you this story shortly.
There is some fantasy world, and bad creatures conquer the world. Only one man can save the world. He just ordinary person, but he was chosen by God. He has to heal creatures to tame animals all of them. I didn’t want to make fighting, bleeding something like that.
This scene describe that he is healing boss creature to tame animal through cross and bible.
After this healing then he will be real angel.
Thank you for reading my thesis story and hope enjoy my work.
Thank you so much.
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3D Modeler & Concept Artist
Danny Kang
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the only things that looks off to me is that the wings need to have more curvature, like they are being deformed by the air like a parachute. Also, the place where the character is holding the cross seems too wide to realistically hold it there with one hand, I would make it slightly more ergonomic.
seriously inspirational work man
or is that stuff under the monster not fire?
Him holding the cross looked kindof off to me at first (hand position and stuff), not a big deal tho i guess :P
Anyways, awsome attention to detail on everything
Best of luck finding a job!
and you could probably afford to lose the splash page all together.
Work looks great though
lol seriously! When someone with this talent is looking for work, you know it's going to be a long road ahead.
That being, the position of his cross thing. His body looks like he's using it as a weapon, as if he could club some serious damage into that thing. But he's holding it stiff and upright like he's on a parade or holding a protest sign.
And so I suppose my question is: Is that cross his weapon? Or is it supposed to be just some type of symbol thing that he's holding saying to the beast: "This is a cross. Look at it, in all of its crossyness. Note how it resembles the letter 'T' and beware."
This piece looks AMAZING, I can't stress that enough. But if the cross is indeed his weapon, I'd reposition it so that it actually looks like he's swinging it.
As for the posing/composition though, I can say that the warrior/angel looks a little stiff in that pose, like he's currently between actions. I'd bring the right leg up a bit more, exaggerate it a bit. Also I agree with Two Listen, the cross looks like he's carrying it as a parade banner. But even if he is simply carrying it, I think it would add action to the piece to have it angled one way or the other, or maybe have him holding it up higher. If it's like a banner, show him "thrusting" it up high, if it's a weapon, show him pulling back hard for the strike.
But that's all I've got. Kinda like in online art school (I did AIO) where you're forced to come up with stuff to say when there isn't much.
Let me tell you little more for this work. This was my thesis project about nonviolence game.
I thought we can make very exciting game without violence.
This angel character has 2 healing tool for bad creatures. Big cross and bible. Why healing? I called healing instead of attack in my game story because he actually doesnt attack anyone.
As I mentioned, this scene describe that he is healing for bad creature, its not attack or fighting.
This is example drawing.
So, cross has deep meaning for me for my thesis. Hopefully, some company make nonviolence game or by myself but never boring. Personally, I also like to play violence game ..but there are so many violence games. I mean .some people love video game(including me) but some people really hate it. You know why
Hum its too serous : )
Anyway, it was nice talking to you guys
Ah, can you see the small book and word 성경 ? That means bible. Its Korean word. : )
In that instance, then, great work! It makes a lot more sense now that I know for certain it isn't supposed to be a weapon. Other than possibly making it more dynamic, raising the right knee a bit, angling his feet a little differently to portray motion - it's all incredibly solid work. Even as is, it's an incredible piece. If for no other reason, the amount of patience it would require.
Many cheers, and good luck in your job search.
one more shot !
Here's my new Zbrsuh work. I wanted to make organic,FiberMesh hair and hardsurface at the same time.