Gas Dock Enviro [WIP]

alexk

Doing a gas dock/pier/baitshop based on a concept by Dan Wheaton (http://www.carbonmatter.com/). Terrain is just a quicky done with crysis terrain editor. Vegetation and terrain property of Crytek. Here's my current progress, all critiques and suggestions welcomed

bmasterson

I'd say it still looks really clean and spartan. Vary your textures a bit maybe some rust or graffiti. Perhaps an old sticker advertisement that never quite came off? Maybe someone got pissed and broke the glass on one of them? Also might consider changing one of the pumps to display different numbers. I noticed pretty quick both pumps are 5.02.

Rhinokey

i think bmasterson is onto something, but i think its more a fault with the geo being all straight, even the dock, looks verry primitive geo wise. give some forms

3DLee

Nice start! Remember though, this is CryEngine, don't be afraid to go a little nuts. Maybe break some of those planks loose and extrude them or remove them entirely. Some decals could help out as well.

dv8ix

Love the low poly texture details man!

osman

Looks good, a bit empty, but I'm sure there's more coming.
I do have a nitpick though; It might be hard to see the counters from some angles, I think it would be more practical if the gas pumps would face the boats on each side of the dock.
Keep it up.

Karmageddon

If this is to take place in the future, you may want to update them gas prices

alexk

Progress has been slow. And I'm stuck on what to do with the bait shop. Door has not been UV'ed yet. Doesn't matter though cause it just looks so bleh! Looking for suggestions, open to anything

3DLee

I love the ice machine, really awesome! For the door, the first thing I thought of was maybe making it some sort of rough screen door, maybe with a ripped screen, and a heavier door behind it?

alexk

Still trucking along with this scene. Some progress on the houses. Changed the lighting and I think I'm going to change the setting from a jungle to something maybe closer to an urban setting, we'll see.

3dLee, I like the idea of the screen door, will probably add it in, thanks

roosterMAP

very pretty! Especially the ice machine!

alexk

Posting this and considering this done. I feel like I banged my head on this with little to no progress for way too long. I tried many idea's but I was not happy with the results. I'm happy I "finished" this and hopefully can take what I learned and improve on my next endeveour. Terrain and vegetation property of Crytek

roosterMAP

I like the door!

Ben Apuna

That's a pretty good scene.

I suppose if you consider it done then disregard the following comments:

It could benefit from some dirt/grime decals along the bottom edge of the buildings.

The texture tiles on the roofs are a bit obvious, try fix or break them up with more decals.

The blue tarp really could use something to hold it down.

The sky is a tad boring, maybe get a cloud formation or two in there.

Other those minor things it's looking nice.