WIP Sub Machine Gun

Hr3shy

Well not much to say about this, its my first post and i been working on this SMG so i wanted to get some feedback. I hope it does well.(front ^)

smoothing groups are not final and i'de like to hear what you have to say.

~Hr3shy

Dr Stench

It looks a bit vague. Have you thought about your concept?

Also, a pic of your wireframe would be very useful for us.

Ott

Avoid black background renders.

Show us the wireframe.

Tell us what software you are using.

Post your reference image.

dolemite

reference. If you have no reference, dont start modeling. Either sketch it up or get some ref images.

iWeReZ

Extremely boxy, and the smoothing is ugly.

Is this your firt model ? try followng as many refs as you can.

Sean VanGorder

Definitely needs some reference. And smoothing issues need worked out.

Are you planning on attempting a high poly?

Taylor Hood

Uhm...Smoothing, change it. Background, change it. (To grey)

Stertman

actually verry verry hard to see what you are trying to show us. as people said, change the background colour, post wire and try to show it from better angles, wanna see the whole weapon together at this stage, since there arnt much details on it, overall shape and functionality is key at this moment,,,

cheers

killingpeople

Everything has been said. Welcome to Polycount. Lets see an update with those changes.

Hr3shy

sXe Seany wrote: »

Definitely needs some reference. And smoothing issues need worked out.

Are you planning on attempting a high poly?

refrence, Halo 1 assault rifle
poly, as low as it can be
smothing, yes its messed up