I just recently re-designed my site and got some of my more recent work up there.
Feel free to critique the site, models/textures, or whatever you want.
I'd like to know what everyone thinks about my stuff, and if it's up to standards.
I'm currently looking for employment as a Character Artist.
MattLink3d.com
Thanks
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Tiny crit, there is some colour banding in thumbs and backgrounds of pictures showing here, intentional?
My only crit is the the gladiator guys robe looks too intense.
By this I mean, it just doesn't fit with the rest of the character, probably because you have so much lighting detail painted in the diffuse and specuar for the robe area.
I believe in this case, if you let the normals handle that area more, and less highlights on the robe, it would read a little better.
This is really the only thing I can think of to crit, so great job man! I'm sure it won't take long for you to land a job.
nice portfolio man
the sea Shepard has some really nice character too!
-woog
It's very encouraging
StJoris: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I knew there was some banding in the thumbs (because of the great .gif format they're in), I'll go back and check the backgrounds though..I definitely don't want it in there.
Bjoz & Ged: I would say I'd go back and fix it being slow, but it's my reel from 2008, when I graduated school.
Brad: Thanks! I might go back and tone that down a little bit, I don't want it to be distracting from the rest of the character.
konstruct: Hey man, if you can get your dick into my demo reel, have at it. haha
http://mattlink3d.com/galleryCharacters_doomRails.html
I clicked next and missed all the good work underneath the first image..
Nice creatures, I'd order them: slasher>shepard>demon just like you have them, just at the top of the page.
I agree with the above that the cloth on the gladiator needs more subtlety, and the drapery on the back of the body looks a unnatural. The pose isn't deforming well on the lower body. He's getting a little bit of the tubey leg syndrome in the front view, but that could probably be fixed by just showing a shot rotated to either side a bit to see more bend in the leg. The waist seems a little awkward to me as well from the front view. It looks like his hips are square to the ground, which doesn't fit with the pose. overall, the pose feels good from the back, but awkward from the front.
Site-wise, I'd remove the prev. and next buttons like Dekard mentioned. That makes it too easy to miss the stacked images and you really don't want any potential employers missing some of your work.
-Good stuff man!
Quick tech question, which shader are you using that supports opacity?
b1ll: Thank you, that means a lot coming from you, your work is amazing!
dekard: I definitely see what you're talking about, I'll look into changing that up so people either know to scroll down, or something.
subpablo: thanks. a lot of the models from the first thumbnail were textured by different people, unfortunately the texture styles vary. I will probably go back and texture them myself at some point, just to make sure they all fit together. I'll probably re-order the models, it should be pretty easy to do.
t4pan: heh, thanks man. =] Most of the models were rendered in the Marmoset engine, for the characters I used the skin material, switch the blending mode to alpha, and move the alpha threshold slider at the bottom if necessary. In maya, I'm pretty sure this shader will do it.
Ah thanks. I'm using marmoset too, but brdf is not available for max. I should have looked at your resume it says there you work in maya heh.
Anyway yeah, I didn't even realize there were more assets in the first page for some reason as well like dekard said.
I just added shots of my high res models on most of the character assets.
Looking for some more feedback on my work.. gotta step my shit up so some companies will actually be interested in hiring me.
Whatever suggestions/ideas you guys have are much appreciated.
I'm in the process of posing/giving a weapon to the biker character at the top of the page.
Thanks in advance
MattLink3d.com
2 things
1. I hate you
2. How do you not have a job yet!?!?!?!
I'd see if you can't make it a little bit more interesting... other than that awesome!
that's RIGHT where my eye went when i opened that image up.....right to the front leg.
anyways......that's nitpicky. super aweseom work man.
Vcortis- great suggestion, once I get back home after this week I'll Push the silhouette and do some optimizing on the models
Raul- thanks. . I went through a few preliminary ideas before sticking to that one. Gotta say a lot of it came from reading "your portfolio repels jobs". That such an amazingly helpful article.
Keizza- I'll shift that leg around and see if I can figure out what's wrong with it, you're right though, there's something that's off about it. Possibly adjusting the silhouette will help too.
Mlichy- Thanks man, nice to hear you like it and the encouraging words. haha, yeah 2ks are big.. Did a test and dropped them to 1k, and they still hold the detail even when zoomed in fairly close. I will go ahead and drop the sizes down, wouldn't want potential employers to think that I need that high of a resolution for my characters.
It's kind of disheartening to see you've been looking for a position since September, I hope you manage to find something soon
That biker is excellent, really nice face. The gladiator is also pretty cool. I agree about the cloth and perhaps a bit heavy on the painted shadows (gives a bit of a previous-gen feel). Super cool critters too.
Some things I'd like to say about your site:
-Get some stills of the stuff from your reel in as quick as you can. (Not everyone will bother to wait for the download.)
-Upgrade that Dreamforge stuff quickly too. I understand the need to show professional work, but it is pretty weak right now and is hurting the overall impression. I'd be tempted to remove it till then.
-Ditch the cartoon bird and worm or seriously improve them. I got the rest of our character team to check out your site. When we saw those guys we started discussing this syndrome of wanting to show style variety, but not executing it well enough to make it worth it. Ultimately it ends up being a buzz kill after all the great stuff at the top of your site.
Anyway, I can see that you are very skilled, make sure everyone else can too.
Lee3dee - thanks
Sputch - thank you. I really appreciate it, you have some really great suggestions. Definitely going to remove the weaker pieces, I don't want my other stuff to be reflected in a negative light because of it. Someti
es I forget that I have those models that are on my reel, because that was my college work. I will probably take the time to go back and texture them and optimize the models too, assuming I still have all the files. :poly122: