Comicon Entry: Onslaught

D4V1DC

Haven't posted anything on PC in a while so, here is:

Onslaught:


2048 textures, Diffuse, Spec, and Normals!

Just want some feedback on him and any improvements you guys see or can help me out with.

Also what would you suggest to add to it to make it look better such as the skin and armor bits?

Yes that's Xaviers head in his back armor when he was trapped inside of onslaught.:poly121: On a side note I wish the opacity in marmoset worked or am I doing something wrong???

Tear it apart, please! and be rude if you feel you have too...

Draffin

Overall i really like it, but the hands are bothering me something fierce. They kinda look like blobs of playdough stuck together (could just be the angle).

And it seems his skin is all the same hue, i don't know the story of Onslaught. But if it's anything like skin/organic material, maybe give it some more variation.

But really nice work all the same

Valandar

Onslaught is basically a psychic energy being contained in a suit of armor, so the 'sameness' of the hue isn't technically "wrong". However, I would give it more of a metallic specular to emphasize that, meself.

Ged

I had no idea that there was a dude in onslaughts back? that just looks really wierd/funny like hes found a little peep hole. Other than that its looking solid.

conte

lol, face on back~win. you made my day.