Hey everyone,
New to the site. I'm hoping to post more of my stuff later on.
For now, for a class project, we're asked to post our models and get critiques, so all critiques welcome
This is my mech vaguely based off a snowmobile. It's meant to be simple and flat.
It's part of a group project where that's the style of the "game" we're making.
Anywho, critique away!
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my only crit is that the silhouette from the front looks plain.. Maybe you could add a bit more to really make it stand out?
Other than that, i like the blade things, but the handle looks like it'd snap off if it was actually used :x
On the upper arms there are little slots running along them.. would be pretty badass if those blades somehow sheathed back in there?
Good luck!
Cool design though.
~P~
but i like that
its an interesting design
good work
I agree. It does look blocky now that you mention it. I'll try crossing the blades like Proxzee suggested. The only reason I didn't stash them in the slots on the arms were because I put those slots there so his arms could bend more. It does sound bad ass, though.
I was eventually going to redesign him and rebuild him in my spare time (whenever that comes around), so I'll try to break up that blocky sillohette then!
I also want to add a little more color to him too. Any suggestions on what kind of designs and/or colors?
I was looking for colors that would contrast well with him. Same with designs, like on his arms, legs and body. I tried varied forms of white racing stripes, but it doesn't quite suit him.