sketchbook: ATT

attattattack

Well this is my first time posting.
I'm doing my project and I know that there's something wrong with my work.
But I'm terrible at seeing through my own stuff and I think I need critiques from someone that is not me, so that I can see a bigger picture of my work.





and I found some artifacts that look like tiny squares all over the head, didn't know how it happened or how to get rid of it, tried smoothing sculpting over it then smooth it out, but it's still there, has anyone met with this issue before?




This is a female head, yeah I know it looks male, any tip to get it to look more feminine?
I think the forehead should be longer and buldge out more, and I will add more wrinkles and more details ion the head, but I'm worried about the proportion and the anatomy of the face right now, any more fixes I should make?

Thank you for your help.

Ged

what does your reference look like?

attattattack

I had so many reference, since the first ref I modeled the base mesh in was just a typical old lady, then I started tweaking this and that, looking at different references, so it's kinda all messed up now and ended up not looking like any reference I've got, lol. Maybe that's the problem.

attattattack

I did some more work on the head.


close up



Full body



This is pretty much my first serious sculp, after the first chapter tutorial I followed in Scott Spencer's character creation book.(great book Scott!)
It(she) is a ghost from Thai urban legend, it's called Krasue. I did some tweaking to it. It's a female ghost with just a floating head and intestines hanging down, the heart would be flashing glow of green light. People would see glowing orbs at night floating. It feeds on faeces and babies umbilical chords after the deliveries. I've heard that there are similar stories in other countries in South East Asia such as Philippines and Indonesia.



I'll post some polypaintings later.

Crits are welcome and appreciate thank you.

Taylor Hood

I like your second one.

ZacD

*face palm*

Its all the same project.

achillesian

attattattack

Some more practice sculpt,


sculpt in about 3-4hours,

Polypainted, about 2 hours.

Lots of mistakes made but it's a good practice, crits welcome so I can improve future works.

Thank you.

attattattack

this is the reference I used

drummer1075

owesome

DrunkShaman

Close but no cigar. Eyebrows are less fuzzy, Eyes arent too big, The nose is pretty straight forward. The bottom of the neck have some hair. Head is a bit flattened from the top.

Good work so far

attattattack

Thanks drummer1075

Nitewalkr, thanks for the crits, I'll keep practicing.

DrunkShaman

Attattattack: I know we're not suppose to crit any one in the scrapbook but its good to point someone to the right direction if you see that he have potential draw / make and yet have desire to do more.

You are welcome. Remember practice makes perfect.

attattattack

Nitewalkr, I don't mind the crits at all, I welcome them anywhere. Working on manythings at once right now, I will post more when I make some progress.
Thank you