character portfolio wip. comments and crits wanted

Stertman

have put up my portfolio since its time for me to start looking for an internship somewhere. Please have a look and tell me if something isnt working, broken links etc. Also if you have an opinion about the overall design then fire ahead.

Its still wip though and the renders are not final.

CV is in swedish atm but will change that during the day.

www.fredrikstertman.com

cheers

Krynn72

Looks pretty good to me. The only things that come to mind is that "Online portfolio of 3d character artist Fredrik Stertman" is a weird sentence, and kind of redundant considering everyone who comes to your site will know what it is, and who its for. Your name is already in the top left, top right, in the info paragraph, and the url. I think thats enough name repetition . At most, I would just put "Online portfolio" there, but I think even that is unnecessary. Also that picture of you, kinda looks like you might be drunk in it.

Stertman

true about the name. changed the text and croped the picture so you dont see the beer glass.. will get a new one if i find any:P

NAILMASK

Take the picture of yourself down. Nobody wants to see that!

EbolaV

I would say, kick that big picture of yourself away, should be enough to have it in your pdf resume. In the text left to the picture is a typing error "wapons". I like your work and the navigation of your site. Good luck for your internshiphunting

Stertman

thanks, fixed the typing error and changed the picture.. i need some kind of picture there i think. but dont know what.. since its a presentation page there should be something i think..

thanks for yout inpputs..

Krynn72

Oh whoops, forgot to mention something else I saw before. You have an extra "s" in the word hesitate. The new text under your name looks a lot nicer and I think that pic works a lot better as well.

Firebert

read this it will help you tremendously

i agree about the picture, take it off, but don't put it in your resum