female shoulder topology for cartoony pin-up

missberetta

My first post! Still quite new to all this and I would really appreciate your feedback. This gal is a cartoony pin-up lady for a fashion game. I'm struggling with the shoulder area in particular. Please help!





Cheers x

d00kie

courtesy of poopinmymouth

Omar_Nabiev

I never seen ass like that:))))))) Make it smaller )

Calabi

Those thighs could kill a man.

renderhjs

looks like a sex doll
the legs look very odd. As for the arms I would first extend them so you can better see how to progress from there, what d00kie posted should already very usefull.

Lord McMutton

Someone posted this a while ago, too

Zwebbie

Have fun!

missberetta

thanks a lot! maybe the booty is a bit obscene, but that's the thing with pin-ups - they are exaggerations... Will tone it down a bit though since this is university work

missberetta

Thank you, Marshal Banana! I've remodeled the shoulders with help from your pic. Hope this is better?





I'd like to achieve a cartoony style with this pin-up girl. A bit like Andy Hickinbottom's Office Girl: http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g62/54062/54062_1110922101.jpg

These are the modelsheets: