Secret Agent Character
polycounter lvl 17
Hey guys, long time since i posted anything here!
WANTED: Amaya Borghild ( A-my-a Bor-jill-da )
Agent in the order of the dusk rain, a guild of elite 'honorable' assassins. Amaya is 28 years old, 5'10 and 122lb and although only a lowly koyakunin rank within the guild, she is more than a match for dozens of our elite soldiers.
Its rumoured she wields the legendary Star Souba one of the 12 swords of creation. It is said that this blade was first weilded by Lord Ozutsu Borghild during our worlds creation, to slay the sun and bring about the first stary night.
Amaya is deadly calm and deathly cold in emotion, avoid close confrontation at all costs.
- Reece Dhamser, Commander - Her Majesties Royal Gaurd.
Im calling her done, still some things id like to do, and maybe ill repose her for another shoot at some other stage - id like to explore her guild, maybe make her sensei or a higher ranked swordsman from the order of the Dusk Rain.
Programs Used:
3DStudio Max 2008
Zbrush 3.2
Adobe Photoshop CS4
Marmoset Toolbag
WANTED: Amaya Borghild ( A-my-a Bor-jill-da )
Agent in the order of the dusk rain, a guild of elite 'honorable' assassins. Amaya is 28 years old, 5'10 and 122lb and although only a lowly koyakunin rank within the guild, she is more than a match for dozens of our elite soldiers.
Its rumoured she wields the legendary Star Souba one of the 12 swords of creation. It is said that this blade was first weilded by Lord Ozutsu Borghild during our worlds creation, to slay the sun and bring about the first stary night.
Amaya is deadly calm and deathly cold in emotion, avoid close confrontation at all costs.
- Reece Dhamser, Commander - Her Majesties Royal Gaurd.
Im calling her done, still some things id like to do, and maybe ill repose her for another shoot at some other stage - id like to explore her guild, maybe make her sensei or a higher ranked swordsman from the order of the Dusk Rain.
Programs Used:
3DStudio Max 2008
Zbrush 3.2
Adobe Photoshop CS4
Marmoset Toolbag
Replies
If i had to give one critique, I'd say something about the hands look a little off. I can't quite put my finger on it. (No pun intended) Maybe its just the angle, but it seems like the transition from the hand to the forearm could be a little more defined.
Then again, I'm far from an expert on anatomy, it was just the first thing to catch my eye. So if you choose to ignore me, I understand, haha.
put her on some kind of base, and render with a gradient background.
really cool final render in marmo too, face looks especially cool
The hand does look a bit strange, like the ring finger is longer than the middle finger, but it's probably the angle. My only critique is in the backstory. At 5'10, 122lbs is very lean. She looks either heavier or much shorter, neither are bad things.
EDIT: Just to clarify, I think her proportions are fine.
nice modelling and materials overall.
My only crit is those belts on her leggings? Are they just belts wrapped around her legs or do they tie in with the fabric of the leggings? I'd say add some detail in there that says it's apart of the leggings.
It just seems kind of silly for her to wrap belts around her legs like that, not unless that's some ancient assassin thing I don't know about and your modernizing it.
Very good work!
sXe Seany: No i think your right, there is still a few things niggling me too !!!
almighty_gir: Yes SIR!!
Nizza_waaarg: Its been a whirlwind man, It just kind of happened!
Noia: haha True true, damn!! ill have to think about it some more man! and maker some corrections!
oobersli: You got me man, she was my biggest inspiration!
NAILMASK: thanks man glad you like!
conte: Sorry man just a personal flavour for the proportions, i wanted something a little more normal, subtle, with a bit of my falvouring I guess, roughyl 7.5 heads tall, wide hips, little less superheroine
LoM Chaos: Your not the first person to say man, Quite a few people have told me shes plain fat!!
d00kie: You got me man, they are belts for the sake of belts, what can i say, i just dig the style haha! They dont serve any purpose other than I like them!
Ferg: Death Dominatrix, man... thats brilliant!!! I like it!!!
P442: Thanks man!
imb3nt: Roger that guys, i will make one
MoP: Thanks man glad you like! Ive been following your work for years dude! haha!
MALicivs:Thanks man glad you like those proportions!!
Thanks for the comments everyone, ill try make some adjustments later on tonight after work!
I think it might be missing self-shadowing/AO along the hairline, and along the cuffs of the clothing.
Also, this may sound nitpicky, but the first thing that caught my eye when I opened this thread was how flimsy the soles of her feet look, I almost expect a tougher material there.
Snowfly: Hey thanks man, you make some good points I might touch those things up - im thinking about making some new poses as well, but im not too sure just yet! Thanks for the headsup ill definate take them into mind!
how did you change the light colours in marmo?
Some wires of the agent
almighty_gir: Haha no prob man, I agree totally im going to do it - just im trying to finish my comicon entry atm. Ill come back to it I promise!!
An Older shot of the High - I adjusted the proportions a fair bit since this shot - shes looking really dumpy here lol.
A polypaint to get a sense of the face and to lay down some sort of base for the face.
Made a paintover when i was trying to work out the eye colours etc
Keep up the good work.